Here my 100WC and I wrote about an Airplane and I have used five in that story! This week I was trying to make my 100WC more interesting by using bigger and better words.
I walked on the beautiful and rich gold AIRPPLANE. I sat on the soft and comfortable YELLOW seat and I could smell yummy food so I pressed the red button for Food!
The Cabin Crew speedily walked to me and the Cabin Crew asked me what do I want! I want five pink cookies and five tiny VIOLIN cakes. When I had EATEN the five pink cookies and five tiny violin cakes, I had made a mess so I pressed the purple button for a clean up! The woman speedily walked to me and SWEPT up. 'Thank you' I said.
Jorja your story made me hungry! You've used some really great adjectives that make your story full of detail and fun to read. And I love the colorful aspect of all the different buttons; very clever writing. Very nice work!
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